Those are both pretty good: unfortunately, there aren't a lot of good ways to define industry specific terms in the text, so if you have to use the term, you're going to have to define it.
I like the second one better. Put a period, then define belt (You might say, "Belt is an industry term meaning blah blah blah").
One thing I will say, "being usually presented" should be taken out and shot. Is there a reason you can't just say "are presented" or "are usually presented"?
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