The way it is structured, the sentence is ambiguous.
Eating and playing like the locals, or like the locals are?
Are is wrong, since eating and playing is a ... hmm ... singular ... concept?
Change it to "is," and you'll be using "is" twice in the same sentence. Actually, a combination of "are" and "is" ain't that great either.
important for enjoying is awkward.
How about this:
Enjoying the food and entertainment the way the locals do can help one appreciate the festive atmosphere.
If you're not comfortable with one, change it to you.
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