Tuesday 15 March 2016

grammar - Isn't a comma necessary?

Both are possible, and have slightly different meanings.



With a comma, you are saying that you were "jumping about":




I was jumping about, up to my thighs in the waters.




The second way to parse it, you were just "jumping" and the waters were "about up to your thighs":




I was jumping about up to my thighs in the waters.




In which case you could also place a comma after jumping:




I was jumping, about up to my thighs in the waters.


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